Thursday, December 11, 2014

Thursday Taster - Jeannie's Cowboys

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This week, now that I'm back, I'm going to take a hot scene from my first attempt at m/f/m erotic romance, Jeannie's Cowboys. I'm about to add some more to it, and try to push it over the 10k word mark, but for now, enjoy...

Her heart soared at the admission of returned attraction. Now she had to take the next step to bring her hot dreams into reality. “Chris is a good looking guy, too, you know. I know guys don’t notice each other, but you’re both very attractive.” She fought to keep her voice steady and casual, but found herself rushing as she voiced her dreams. “In fact, I’ve had some interesting dreams of you both. At the same time.” The thought of the dreams made her warm all over, and she was sure that her panties would be soaked.

The silence from Tyler had her biting her lip with worry, concerned she had offended the man she had been enamored with for quite a few years. “At the same time, you say?” he finally asked, his voice slightly husky. “In a particular location?” They were at the door to his little apartment and the look in his eyes when she finally dared to glance up told her that he was far from offended. She shook her head, excited to think that he was interested in fulfilling the dreams that plagued her almost every night. “Well then, maybe you should come tell us both some more about these dreams and see what we can do about them.”

He opened the door and motioned for her to enter first, although he made sure she had to brush against him as she walked past. She breathed in the smell of salt and horse and a soft moan escaped her lips. It was a smell that she had always loved, the musky tang wreaking havoc on her sense of self control. Jeannie couldn’t hear the shower running but movement in the bedroom made her realize that Chris would be getting dressed.

A sudden urge grabbed hold of her, and with a wicked glance back at Tyler, she strode into the bedroom, not bothering to knock. Chris, only wearing a towel, turned around to face her, surprised but excited by the intrusion. He held the towel closed, which disappointed her, but the rash urge that had taken hold of her moments earlier had yet to relinquish its control. Jeannie quickly closed the distance between them and she could see the growing attraction in his eyes. She grabbed the back of his neck, pulling him down to her level, and boldly kissed him. He barely hesitated and his kiss back was deep, hot and passionate.

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Wow, what a good piece at the end of there. I can see a development of the story, only could wish this would go on.
Nicely done! Wouldn't that be wonderful, to bold and just take what you want, when you want it? Just like that... Very sexy. xo
Very hot. Looks like it's going just fine.
Thanks everyone. I'm having fun writing this! The new element of two guys and one girl is challenging, but because it's new, it's surprisingly fun and easy when the muse wants to cooperate! I can't wait to finish it and get it published.
Sexy! great sensory details which put me, as a reader, in the scene with her. Nicely done.
Very pleased to hear, thank you! :)
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Pablo Michaels · 539 weeks ago

This scene is full of a potentically explosive sexual encounter. I can only guess what Chris thinks while draped on;y in a towel and waatching her boldly kiss Tyler. She is a gutsy woman who doesn't appear to be shy. I love the dynamics yet to unfold.
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Thanks Pablo. It's a boldness I kind of envy but would never posses myself. I'm living vicariously through my heroines lol
I love the build up here. I can see the beginnings of great heated passion. Love your taster
It seems they are both going to be happy with her fantasy.
Thanks Naomi and Linda. I have another couple yummy scenes to add, and the boys are loving it!

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