Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Tantalising Tuesday

I've decided that yes, I'm finally ready to join in with Tantalising Tuesdays, Thursday Tasters, and Flash Fiction Friday. My muse needs the whip cracked, and here's hoping these exercises get her flexing once more! To read other Tantalizing Tuesday posts, just click here.

An innocent pom pom flower? No...

She lay on her back, completely naked except for the blindfold covering her eyes. A cool breeze from the open window licked her skin and made the satin sheets rustle underneath her. Silk ropes had her tied to the bed posts, and she was squirming well before he even started. She felt the mattress dip as he climbed on to the bed and straddled her leg. His warmth was exciting in itself, but the anticipation of what he had in store for her had her quivering.

A tickle so soft that she almost missed it brushed against her stomach, and sent goose bumps shooting across her body. A second sweep across her abdomen of something delicate and fragrant, and she arched her back, a moan escaping her lips. His large hand was then on her belly, as he gently pushed her back down on the bed. She felt his fingers trace idle lines down to her sensitive nub, and disappointed heat flooded her when he moved away. Tingles replaced her disappointment when he began to sweep the soft something across her skin once more. The feather light tickles ventured down to her center and she was consumed by fiery ecstasy.

12 comments:

  1. Oh, the power of a flower!. Great snippet xx

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  2. I loved the visual details in this. It packed a nice punch in so few words.

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  3. Beautiful descriptions, wonderful visuals and near palpable tactile imagery. I think I am going to fall in love with your muse! Bravo. Loved it! Welcome! Xo

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  4. Thanks everyone! It's been so long since I wrote something hot like this. Glad to know I still have it!

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  5. Beautifully written, very hot and erotic. Excellent tease, Phoenix. Good to have you here with us

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  6. Such a sensual tease. So glad you joined us :-)

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    1. Thanks Doris, I'm only wishing I'd have joined sooner! But I'm here now and looking forward to more.

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  7. Excellent teaser. So erotic, and your use of senses breathes life into the words. Fabulous. Looking forward to more of your writing x

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  8. Damn, I'm intrigued. Very sensual; erotic! Welcome to Tantalizing Tuesday Teasers.

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  9. Thanks Naomi and Ray! I'm glad to be a part of this now, thanks to Naomi's nudge ;) a great way to stretch the writing muscles again!

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