Saturday, October 1, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #7

This has been a slow week with writing, but I've been delighted to enter the Mills & Boon New Voices Contest with The Wolf In The Neighborhood. Round One of rating closes on Thursday 13th October so please sign up and give a rating, help me get in to the top 20!
I shall be continuing with The Wolf In The Neighborhood for my Six Sentences, jumping forward a bit from last week. For other Six Sentence Authors, follow the link above.
This week sees Derek and Krissy spending their first night together... 

Wave after wave of pleasure broke, and she writhed beneath his hands as he tried to hold on to her bucking hips. Never had she had such a powerful climax, certainly not at the hands of a man. Krissy felt helpless, awash in a stormy sea of pleasure, but at the same time, she had never felt safer as Derek gently slowed his flicking tongue and stroking fingers.
As the waves lessened, she was left with a satisfied buzz flowing through her body and her mind was delightfully fuzzy from the rush. She could barely muster a full sentence.
“Oh holy shit, Derek, you really know how to make a woman want to stick around,” she panted.

17 comments:

  1. Whoa *fans self* hello Sailor!!! that's hot!

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  2. What a talented boy Derek is! (laughs) Love it!

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  3. I'd say so! nicely done.
    cheers
    Liz

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  4. Very well-written! Great job and good luck with the contest!

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  5. Thanks everyone! I'm only about 2200 words from my goal for this, then it's editing time! Here's hoping I get in to the top 20 with the contest as well. Here's hoping this kicks off my career as a successful author!

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  6. Ring the alarm, that story is on FIRE! Hot Six!

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  7. Hahahaha thanks Ray! Robin, glad you like it :)

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  8. Oh, what a very good boy Derek is! I love a man who minds his mouth :)

    Great Six!

    Laura

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  9. Dang...were you peeking through the bedroom window here last night- could've been me you were talking about
    Great 6

    Dawne P

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  10. Good six and good luck on the contest.

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  11. sexy six, and good luck with the contest xxx

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  12. Phoenix, I rated your entry and left a comment. Good luck!

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  13. Oooh...yummy!! Loved this!!

    SammyJo

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  14. Thank you so much to everyone! Means a lot that my first serious attempt at writing is being so well received! Here's hoping it's a massive hit!!

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