Friday, September 16, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday #5


 The weeks are flying by, and we're at the time: Six Sentence Sunday. Last week Krissy had just put her robe on after being sprung sunbathing nude on the rooftop by new neighbour, Derek...

            He gave her a flash of a bright, earthy smile. There wasn’t an ounce of overconfidence in him, she could tell. Derek was comfortable seeing her naked, but wasn’t expecting anything to come of it. As much as she appreciated his apparent honor, Kristina thought to herself that she would definitely appreciate running her hands over that muscular torso underneath the tight shirt.
            Her attraction must have been written across her face, as he started to blush in turn. Krissy shifted her weight, and brought her mind back to reality.

8 comments:

  1. Thanks hon. I delve in to background of Derek soon, but I'm thinking of skipping ahead a little next week to when it starts getting steamy...

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  2. Thanks hon! If things go to plan, this will be submitted to a publisher by the end of October, and be my first submitted work!

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  3. HE blushes? I love when a man blushes- so sweet

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  4. Haha yes, well he is a country boy at heart, originally an American country boy, than lived in the English country for a few years with scars on his heart. I'm hoping for a nice twist at the end of this novelette to lead in to a steamier sequel!

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  5. Oh! You do sooooo well with this! Love it!

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